in the span of time it takes for you to touch our lips together.
and it's never felt like this before.
and this can't just be simple lust;
not when the brush of your skin against mine
has me breathless already.
it's a bite of apocalypse when you do finally get round to it;
i'm stretched out underneath you, earthy expanse of brittle
brown shaking and quaking with tremors as your light-white
skin moves across mine like lightning; your voice an echo of
Gabriel's Horn, signalling the end and your fingers stroke
angel-harp ribs and i make the most jawdropping sounds.
my death is little,
and i am remade, reborn,
in your large warm hands.
hi , beautiful story and composition. it gaqve me the chills or should i say hot flashes or hot flashing chills so intnse that the hot feels cold and vice versa :)
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myconnection is avg, broadband, your blog takes 2 minutes almost to load the page and when its finished everthing is still a bit slow
i was wondering if it could be the chat box thing?? what do you think? is it just my computer?
rivercat: thank you so much. it's the same for me, if that's of any consolation. ;)
ReplyDeletesomething serious: yeah, i think it is this stupid chatbox. i'm getting rid of it cos it takes my browser forever to load as well. all blame goes to thedreamer for making me get one. x
i dont think it was the chat ox but that didnt help.We will try to fix this because the prolblem is bad enough that it will keep people away. I would first get rid of all the labls on the far right. Ive noticed some sites using them ar slow. I dont think they are of much use so perhaps that would be a good place to start.
ReplyDeleteit may be a loading issue to load all those links but it may still be something else. try deactivating "labels"and get rid of all that thn see if anything gets better.( faster page load and less drag on reloads and clicks)
ahhhh, i see. i've fixed that now, yay! :D
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